Udon (udon@social.076.moe)'s status on Friday, 30-Jun-2023 23:30:32 JST
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Sure.
But btw, although it depends on who your purpose or target audience is, I feel like the tone is a bit too aggressive. IMO English is less "livelier" than Japanese (IIRC you are studying English), so I guess, if your page is translated into English, it will sound marginally okay, but in the original text, it gives me an uncomfortable feeling. I could be wrong though.
Also, there are TONS of news links, but what are they for? No one is going to spend weeks and months to click and read them, and it is extremely time-wasting and useless to do so: we can already know they can do (almost) whatever they want because of the rights we given up (centralization of resources, welcoming them to monitor and manage all about us etc). But if there is something you think is important you should put some opinions (in a polite tone) beside them.