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1. Noah (noah@social.076.moe)'s status on Friday, 30-Jun-2023 05:45:36 JST Noah

   • Udon
   頑張って、neocities<まぁセキュリティ的によくないけど>でサイト作ったぜ.....とりあえずこれのソースコードだけでも。
   保存しといてくれ....たぶん、そのうち消されるから保存しといて~~~~
   
   https://mike701.neocities.org/news
   • Udon (udon@social.076.moe)'s status on Friday, 30-Jun-2023 23:30:32 JST Udon

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     Sure.
     
     But btw, although it depends on who your purpose or target audience is, I feel like the tone is a bit too aggressive. IMO English is less "livelier" than Japanese (IIRC you are studying English), so I guess, if your page is translated into English, it will sound marginally okay, but in the original text, it gives me an uncomfortable feeling. I could be wrong though.
     
     Also, there are TONS of news links, but what are they for? No one is going to spend weeks and months to click and read them, and it is extremely time-wasting and useless to do so: we can already know they can do (almost) whatever they want because of the rights we given up (centralization of resources, welcoming them to monitor and manage all about us etc). But if there is something you think is important you should put some opinions (in a polite tone) beside them.
   • Udon (udon@social.076.moe)'s status on Friday, 30-Jun-2023 23:34:56 JST Udon

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     • Udon
     There are also too much exclamation marks IMO.
   • 今も元気ハツラツ太郎 (haturatu@social.076.moe)'s status on Friday, 30-Jun-2023 23:59:08 JST 今も元気ハツラツ太郎

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     • Udon
     冷静でワロタ
     うどんさん、もはやシャナ1期の時の冷徹なとき https://social.076.moe/url/492225
     Udon likes this.
   • Noah (noah@social.076.moe)'s status on Monday, 03-Jul-2023 16:06:11 JST Noah

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     • Udon
     ogey