i finished doing the lineart for the rest of the naked body which i still need to color in
which doesn't take into account the fact i need to put clothes on him afterwards
and his mouth just still looks weird even after a few modifications... i might have to make it more simpler because it just looks out of place. or pray it looks good in practice rather than the model. or maybe it's the expression.
regardless, will take suggestions on how to make this mouth look cuter and more consistent, because it just looks plain off than it does fetish-y.